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Today’s excerpt from Cherry Tune-Up immediately follows last week’s. Bobbi Jo has just interrupted Jack’s work on his car.
“So what were you doing under there?” Bobbi Jo pointed at his Firebird. “I like your car. You sure keep it sleek and shiny,” she rattled on.
He’d swear she was nervous about seeing him after all these years.
“Why do you have to use a light to see in broad daylight?”
“You are full of questions.”
She folded her arms under her breasts and then over them.
It occurred to him that she wasn’t used to going without a bra. Was she trying to hide them from him? So why hadn’t she bothered with a bra in the first place? Anyway, her questions were stalling tactics.
He decided to play along. He picked up the light. “This is a timing light. I was getting ready to set her timing. Been tuning up the old girl.” He beamed her a broad smile. “She’s almost cherry, you know. Just about as perfect as when she came off the assembly line, maybe even better. When her stroke is right, she purrs like a kitten.”
“I bet you have that effect on all your women.” Bobbi Jo’s blue eyes conveyed an age-old invitation.
He swallowed hard. “Since when have you become a tease? Come on in the house. I want to get cleaned up. Then you can tell me why you’ve shown up on my doorstep after all these years.”
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If you’d like to meet Bobbi Jo as well, stop by my blog post from October 30 for the opening lines of the first chapter HERE.
Title: Cherry Tune-Up
Publisher: B&B Publishing: Ebook
Released: December, 2013
Novel: 31,000 words
Cover Artist: Rebecca Poole
Heat Rating: Four Flames
Explicit sex: M/F, F/F; Ménage: F/F/M; light bondage; cosplay; voyeurism; anal sex; sex toys.
Desperate for a crash course in lovemaking, Bobbi Jo Martin seeks out her childhood best friend. A successful contractor with NASCAR dreams, Jack Day has never forgotten her—but how will he protect his heart? In a moment of sheer genius he decides to play the role of master…
WHAT THEY’RE SAYING…
Five Stars at Amazon:
Bobbi Jo and Jack are sizzling, and then they put Joy into the arrangement and wow! Bobbi Jo learns more than she imagined. It’s a romantic, fun tale. Enjoy !! D. Hart
The very first word that came to mind when I finished this book was HOT! and I do mean HOT!! Crystal
Let me be Bobbi Jo – what a delightful story! Sheila
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